SONGWRITING SERIES: EDITING YOUR LYRICS
This is the first posting in what will be an ongoing songwriting series. I have so many talented musician friends and I'd love your feedback and input. Songwriting is both an art and a science so I'm excited to receive perspectives from different writers.
I've always been enamored by great songwriters. The music of John Lennon, Eric Clapton, Sarah Mclachlan, and numerous others portray rich character, memorable melodies, and a fresh way with words. Their songs can pull at emotions, compel deep thought, and in some cases, even change a person's world view. In the eyes of many, these songs are artistic, inspired, and driven by emotions. But on the other hand, it's clear that these individuals have devoted time and thought into their craft. So what are some practical areas in which upstart writers can improve?
For me, the most challenging aspect of songwriting is producing lyrics. One thing I've always told my students is that writing songs is very similar to writing other forms of literature. As a result, one of the biggest principles is making sure to edit your lyrics. Good novel authors will go through draft after draft before finding the words they want. The consequence is the same with lyrics. The more time you take to draft and think through your lyrics, the better the final product will be. On occasion, the first lyrics are the right ones for the song but too often that's just an easy excuse out of hard work.
During editing, work on avoiding cliché phrases. There have been several occasions when I've been listening to a song that was filled with overused lyrical lines and I could finish most of the sentences before they were sung. Try to find a unique but simple way to say what you are thinking. I also find that I have my own set of cliché phrases. They may not be commonplace to other writers but they are lines that I have placed in other songs. These can be challenging to recognize but it's a good idea to look over old material and make sure that you aren't regurgitating the same lyrics.
Another thing to examine is lyrical flow. Is your song conversational? Does it sing naturally? If you find the ends of phrases are awkward, choppy, or drastically different in timing from one line to the next, then your song needs major editing. Don't force a certain lyric that you really want to use if it isn't complimenting the rest of the song. Let it go and find something else to say.
Lastly, don't try to do all of your editing in one session. Take a break, let your mind rest, and then go to work again. There have been times when I've come back to a song and laughed at how terrible my ideas were the night before. If the song still looks good a few days after your last editing session, then it's ready to be shared!
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